Go on.

Bad,but that does'nt mean that you are an asshole like everyone else says,heck they couldn't do any better either,you make a flash and show it to newgrounds,thats good,no matter how worn out the whole style is,it doesnt matter,whats the point in making your first movie if no one can see it eh?
SO I say practice more and don't listen to what these jerks say.
Good Luck,may the force be with you.

Some Tips

MUSIC: If you have a sound editing program, first cut the music down to the size of your toon - you don't need the whole thing. Also, drop the quality of it since it's what's hogging up most of the file size. I gave "Sound" a 3 because, though it sounded good, it was unnecessarily large.
STORY: Write a clearer, more fluid story. This piece just jumps around and doesn't make much sense.
ART: If you're going to stick with stick figures, try making them look a little more interesting and try animating them a bit better. There are A LOT of animators here who do the stick thing. Ask yourself how you can make yours stand out.
I hope the tips help! Keep on Flashing!

NOOOOOOO

NOT PAPA ROAH NO IM DIEING SUCH FUCKED UP MUSIC

Look here...

I want you to know the only reason this is getting protected is because everyone just comes on here and clicks 5 if the movie is long and 0 if its short.

If they sat down and waited instead of clicking, closing then voting then you'll understand you don't deserve to be saved.

Call me an ass or abuse me, that's how shallow ppl are following regulations but tell me this: Why make something we already got in lower detail and humour with repetitive violence.

Sorry kid but the truth is this isn't a great flash, I couldn't waste another breath, thanks for reading.