I mean, I like the concept, this makes me wanna reread Prequel. But I guess I don't get the game? It looks like a webpage, but its a flash game on Newgrounds, so it's a bit annoying to navigate. And since the story is already concluded, it really just feels like a visual novel. It's got the homestuck/Prequel vibe, but since it's already done, it just feels like a hard to navigate visual novel

this has probably been said a million times but this reminds me a lot of homestuck! i see a lot of cool stuff in the future for this comic :D (if that makes sense)

Huh, quite the interesting little game! Reminds me a lot of those goofy web comics, forum collab works or CYOA stories like Homestuck, or games like the Loathing series. It's a bit of a bummer that I'm not making any choices and am just reading a story, so I somewhat struggle to call it a game, per se, but nevertheless it is a rather charming story with very goofy and amusing art and prose.

I am a bit torn though: as much as I do like the experimental process of audience participation and all that jazz, it's only the lucky ones that come in when it is still being written and not only suggest options, but have their suggestions integrated into the book, that have the most fun. For everyone else, they're just reading a book that isn't finished yet and so have to wait unsatisfied, or feeling bad that their suggestion didn't get selected, or, someday eventually, just reading a completed book, which as funny as it is, has no interactivity to it. Not saying you shouldn't keep what doing what you're doing: shine on you crazy diamond! It's just that I am one of those unlucky ones that is feeling a bit unsatisfied, as much as I do think it is a charming story.

Silly western game :)

Nice to see something that is simply silly, 5/5