This is more of a noir/industrial film. It's about a man, who is created in a factory, makes his own choices.
Hmm.
I liked the idea you were going towards, but you just seemed to lose grasp of it through the short flash.
So he's given a mission, alright, we know he's created to work, but he has no real motive to changing his path in life.
It just seems like you had him depressed, longing for something, without giving him a real reason to go against the grain.
meh
the drawings were alright, but this one really needed to be longer and it needed color too.
GREAT!
i loved it, a rather sad ending that none of these morons can truly appericiate!
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Dude.definitely an improvement over the other animation.They're both good but this one's better.
not bad
good work, work on it some more.TONY