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i worked hard for this one, please don't tell me i'm shit, im only a rookie flash maker.

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Waiting for Conclusion.

Okay, look, I'm not going to waste your time with why I'm going to blam this, you already know why from all the other reviews. This isn't bad for your first couple of flashes, in fact, the animation is pretty good for a first-timer. The problem I have with this is that it's a flash for the sake of having a flash and doesn't really do much for itself or its viewers. The first one made me think that Jesus was destroying one of the towers of the World Trade Center and this one makes me think that maybe you're on an end of the world kick. You definitely would have profited if you had just made this series (as short as each episode is, especially) one big episode. Also, perhaps some textual narration to give us some kind of story instead of just dropping us into the middle of "flash guys blowing things up". Go ahead and finish this up, you'll feel satisfied for completing it and hopefully we'll gain some satisfaction for ending the confusion. Then go on and do a lot of practice at home until you're sure you've got something that will blow us all away. You're graphics do actually show potential, now go do something with it.

whats the point?

good flash making but whats the story? theres no point. also i know you used sounds from the age games so you cant let that go with out some points taken off.

It's not bad, but...

It's not great either. I don't really like the "To Be Continued...", I'd rather you just start the story, and a month later, come out with a big finished flash.

Wel you are a rookie!

I will give you a ten for the effort in everything! On one condition!
Make movies with a point....i mean any meaning what so ever. That was meaningless! You put a lot of effort into giving me nightmares about Jesus who wants to throw big grey balls at me *shrugs* thats fucked up!
I hope you meant it to be funny!
Otherwise...........BUS H CAN SUCK MY DICK THAT LITTLE COCKSUCKER HE IS A FUCKING OIL CRAZED DILDO LOVER!!

Not just the flash that sucks

Don't worry, I'm not slamming you JUST for the shitty flash. WTF? Is this Christ gone Super Saiyan? No fucking wonder christians are bound and determined to wipe out each other if this is how you picture Your messiah.

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3.17 / 5.00

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Mar 21, 2003
7:49 AM EST