Wel you are a rookie!
I will give you a ten for the effort in everything! On one condition!
Make movies with a point....i mean any meaning what so ever. That was meaningless! You put a lot of effort into giving me nightmares about Jesus who wants to throw big grey balls at me *shrugs* thats fucked up!
I hope you meant it to be funny!
Otherwise...........BUS H CAN SUCK MY DICK THAT LITTLE COCKSUCKER HE IS A FUCKING OIL CRAZED DILDO LOVER!!
YOU'RE SHIT!
LOL, I'm just kidding.. (sorry, I couldn't resist)
I enjoyed these.. Want to see more!
If this is what you can do as a rookie.. Well, I will be quite anxious to see what you can do as a pro.
I am adding you to my list of favorite authors so I am sure never to miss your work.
Good work and keep it up!
Not bad for a first attemt at flash
Well, you clearly need improvement, but for a first flash it's really good.
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Although it looks funny, it's crap.
i have a suggestion
next time try finishing all these "deliveries" in one movie. The score will be higher and it will make more sense.