(title in work)
This needs a lot of work. The thing that annoyed me most was the audio. You tried to make the sound effects from your own mouth, but you could have gotten them from an outside website, such as Flashkit, and it would have sounded much better. The voice overs were also pretty annoying, as you put an effect on them to make them very high pitched at hard to hear. The graphics weren't much better sadly. Lots of tweens and simple images that just didn't cut it.