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Toppy´s fun web game

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this game was made in turbowarp. its mostly a game too see how good i could do the 20s web game style.

To have the full dev intentions downloaded at gamejolt.


https://gamejolt.com/games/Toppy_web/805255


See you next game ;)

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20's web design? I'm just gonna assume that's a typo.
The aesthetic seems *possible* with 2000's technology, but the style doesn't really feel like it comes from that era. At the very least, I never saw any flash games that featured this lineless art back then.
However, it is nice to look at.

I'm a bit confused on some of the other design choices as well.
The orange glitchy effect doesn't look like it comes from the same game, and blackish gray "glitch" that covers Toppy's face doesn't really look like anything in particular?
It's hard to tell from such a short demo, but it seems a bit derivative of Amanda the Adventurer and Andy's Apple Farm.
However, this aesthetic would be very unique for a FNAF game, as most tend towards a more realism based approach.
Also, there is a lot of spelling mistakes that do not seem intentional, including in the newspaper(?)
at the end.

As for the horror, there is potential here, but there needs to be more buildup and atmosphere.
Jumping the player with "spooky" stuff in rapid succession, especially in such a short game, reduces and even nullifies the effectiveness of the scares.
Don't be afraid to have stretches on occasion where nothing bad happens, but it *feels* like something WILL go wrong. Sound design is you friend- pick your sound effects and music wisely, and know when to bring them out and when to leave the player in unsettling silence.

In short, you've got a good start, but it just needs some more refining.

mrchees responds:

thank you i am making a 2nd game with a lot more games so the build up to the jumpscare, and the next game is gonna be set place in 2011 so the game is gonna look better, and this is gonna be one of the gameplay in the full fnaf fan game, and no it would be the same like this, think of this is a demo to see if it sticks or not, and the bad english is for i am not native merican

not scary but playable 5 out of 10 not bad but could be a lot scarier like Lumpy Torch

mrchees responds:

yeah im making a 2nd game with a lot more scares and more games to play and Much more then the 2 secrets, And if you want to find one of the scares then i recomend you search in the title screen for one of the secret ;)

I think this did a good job at replicating an late 1990s or early 2000s web game. The simplicity of it really showed it off.

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Score
2.40 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 5, 2023
3:19 PM EDT