hm

not bad for ur first flash, not a bad start... good effort, the style is ok, nice preloader and stuff, neway good job in it!

oooook....

This was weird, was the wands only purpose to make people turn into shit...?

- Faust

A good start

This isn't a bad movie, althought the graphics aren't fantastic, you obviously have some Flash skills and have used them well. The speech was clear enough to be understandable and you attempted some lip movement to make it more convincing. The movment was however better on the guy with the moustache. There were some nice sound effects in there as well. As for the file size, less than 250kb, that's fantastic considering all the sound effects and speech it contained. A well optimised Flash, what I like to see. It was pleasing to see an attempt at some backgrounds aswell, instead of the usual boring white backgrounds that beginners use. I was impressed with the preloader, it was good to have a loading bar and a percentage. With a better storyline and some more memorable characters, with unique voices, you've got potential for a half decent series here. Good luck for more.

I din't......

think it was bad for your first submission as an a flash learner who is yet to submit anything into the portal I realy can't say anything but if you don't mind I think that this is a good idea for a series. The only suggestions that Icould give you would be to maybe touch up on the illustration (Iknow its hard if your using a mouse and may not be the greatest artist in the world) and maybe it would be a good idea to give hero man a strange or funny sidekick. I gave you a 3 on the pico scale.