you needed practice

i'm taking that this is a year old, and you have had a little more work, but at the time this was relesed you really needed to work on soem points

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what the hell was that.....it made no sense and it was stupid

uhhhh.. BLAM!

wtf is this?? inanity is probably the best word to describe the damn blammable piece of chit.

Pure Inanity

The animation is awful from the get go -- and never improves. The storyline is simply a series of desultory scenes slopped together. Mr. Williamson may claim incoherence as a virtue here, but in the end none of it is interesting.

That said, the extended sound montages showed some skill, some thought, and some talent. Unfortunately the good is mixed in with a fair amount of bad where Mr. Williamson arbitarily breaks styles.

Mr. Williamson would benefit from the discipline of collaborating as the sound designer with an animator who lacks that talent.

Oww my ears

My God man! Not only did your high-pitched voice track give me a head-ache, it scared my dog out of the room.

Besides this, I was un able to understand what this insane piece is about. Please be more clear on what you're trying to tell your audience before you start your next one.