But Joe, you need more gradients!
lol... honestly though, i did think it was great... for a beginner. Even the stickman bar scene was better than the first few things i did (which got lost in grade 10, sadly). I think I know better than anyone the potential you've got, considering Worms World War is going to kick ass! (a little hype for our project... it's gotta start somewhere)
hehe, take it easy man