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A lonely night

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Would you befriend her and make her feel less lonely?

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95% would befriend because "Dnd gobo girls unite - signed my own goblin girl",

bunch of critique stuff:

-Wishing this was a bit more zoomed in because it feels a bit empty and far away. If the goal is to underline how lonely she feels it works, but it could have been divided into 2 different shots, one up of her up close where she's looking at her phone followed by the zoom out showing her alone in her king-size bed (D':)

-I wish the animation was a bit longer but for a fully colorised animation can't complain, I love her design and the attention to details like the matress and the hair moving with her, the concept of a late night sadness is fun!

-The animation of her arm going down is cool though a little bit too steady, Hair is hard to animate and hair while someone is laying on top even harder but it could have been kept in place but just slightly dragged as she moved :3 (right now the hair behind her is a bit too visibly being free deformed)

- The white flash at the end of the loop hurts the eye D: ( for a moment I really thought this was part of the animation and represented rain and thunder outside of her room)

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edit 1: daaw Really glad to have my comment be useful to you in some way :'3! Animation is like any other medium every artist has their unique take on it and I know that the more you'll try your hand at it and more your unique voice will shine, there's already something there so I really encourage you to pursue it if it is something you find fun to do! If you need any recommandation in terms of free software to put together your animations let me know :D!

Also on the fact that this is vent art, definitly got that vibe and understand the feeling 100%, Being ignored on things you put efforts in hurts but really it's best to like vibe and do your thing! Those who matter will stick around uvu! Don't let this stop you! ^^ There are plenty of school of fish in the sea, and all in due time you'll find your people >:3 #GoboGalsUnited

Ninsterliscious responds:

Hey! Thank you for the criticism ! I'm new at animating and still trying to understand the basics. I think the program I used to make it into a video file added the random white screen, sorry about that.

But I feel like I could learn from what you've told me and I highly appreciate it :)

The story behind it was a bit of a vent art. Essentially of no matter what I do or say, always getting ignored but it hitting the hardest when a friend server does that whilst one other person gets all the attention.

But I am glad you liked it! I will keep working on it and try to improve !

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Mar 2, 2023
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