Dang, I'm sorry. I ended up liking this, but didn't think it was great. I thought it was too short. The best part was the joke at the end. I never have burned CDs before. I only know burning like how they do it at the end here.
The voice is fine. It was at least easy to understand. It's fine for an early submission. Well, everyone else seems to like it a lot more. Fine for them.