Cool

Well i thought that this was a great attempt for your firs flash, short and sweet

Bleh .....

I actually didnt like it , short , boring , waste of my time.
better luck next time , you'll need it !

short

it was alright, had potential to be good, but because it was so short, that hurt it.

((( HMMMMMMM )))

Hmmmm sprites are ok and easy, but Artwork would make it even better, i know it might take some time but art is the key, like i said sprites are ok, but artwork is what its all about right, anyways it was a decent story seemed to move along, keep up the good work...

~X~

Alright

It was alright, make the text a tad slower next time. Gave you a 3.