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^^Good Points^^
Ok, the storyline developing is decent. It's not very original and has a ton of holes, but it's ok. I like how you animated a lot more in this one.
^^Needs Improving^^
You still need to add a ton of animations, just subtle stuff to bring out some more details. Like I said, the storyline has a lot of holes, like why was the first triforce just sitting in the middle of the field? and why would link just give it away if he suspected it might have been triforce? Not to mention that the storyline is really predictable.