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Before you sumbit it to anything, take a look at it. a good, long, look. Then, if you think it needs some improvements, WORK ON THEM, Do not sumbit them, yet. Only if you think its 100% great and perfect then you can sumbit it.

If I could give a 5.5 I would.

I somewhat laughed at that, it was the stupidest (stupid in the family guy, ha ha that's insane sense) flash I watched today. Now if you improved on graphics and thought of another stupid concept, you might just do pretty good for yourself.

If I was an old detective in a trench coat and you were a younger less experience agent was about to give up because Johnny the Tiger got away, And we were sitting on the docks by the city in the sunset I would sit down beside you and say: "Your heart was in the right place, but you can't give up on it ya hear?" Then i would shake you vigourously and tell you a story of my own that would result in flash backs and you understanding what I meant. Then you would stand up and say "Wait a minute Steve, I got it." to which I would respond, "what are you talking about Gordie?" You would tell me enthusiastically and excitedly "I know how to get Johnny! Those hookers were lying on the stand, and I know how to prove it!"

woorb

simple and to the point. the words went by a little fast at the beginning before i knew they were going by. keep it up

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Astonishing......

not bad :)

I tell you, I don't know what the deal is with those other guys. I thought it was pretty funny and not bad for a beginner. Some beginners will post something even I could make (and i don't know how to make one yet). Seriously though, I thought this was good considering your experience. Keep up the good work and don't mind the jerks that try to discourage you. (yeah, i know... strange coming from a Dark Aura)