This really looks fun. The premise is silly and it's less "haha randumb" than most Adult cartoons, even though the entire thing is kind of nuts.
It works, but it needs polish. There's bits about this that feel like it would truly benefit from being a little bit more fleshed out, like the individual character interactions. It feels like something that could have been played out in two episodes rather than one, and as a result, it really feels condensed.
Great stuff.
Keep at it,
-CO