What strikes me as very powerful in your scene is the way the flower is depicted with a light gray color and good shape language, building a strong silhouette. The dimensional angles and perspective lines you've used help establish the scene effectively. You are demonstrating professionalism.
The anticipation leading up to when the bean man pulls out the flower flows smoothly, with effective exaggeration from the back to the front. The viewer feels the impact as the flower is closest to their perspective.