TL;DR good but not very funny. you should read it though.
So I think it has potential, the animation style I like with its simplicity (no offense) but my least favorite part has to be the comedy. It feels like you had jokes to be set up but the punch lines aren't very rewarding as a viewer, they almost seemed like inside jokes only you and some friends would get. Take the last joke about the sports bra, it was a pretty good joke but he should've stopped talking after the "no, haven't seen them" him mumbling that someone may have taken them already lets the viewer know that he has something to do with it. although you did surprise me and possibly others with him wearing the bra, I thought he threw them out or something. basically my point is to add a sort of surprise factor to your jokes.