Awesome game! The art is incredible, and I like how many options there are. My only issue was the lack of sound effects kept me from getting too immersed into the story, otherwise, it's a short but sweet experience
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A game for the Touhou Pride Jam 4!! https://national-needlmouse.itch.io/i-love-my-yoshika its a short game!
WARNING: Renpy might have some problems with their web stuff so if there is any glitches, its not my fault.
It was short, for sure. My problem is mainly that what *is* here doesn't seem to have a ton of effort put into it- in fact, there's not really a story here at all. I know you mentioned on Itch.io that you were bad at storytelling, but you should at least add some more substance to your game, whether you perceive it as bad or not. I did however enjoy the art style- Yoshika's standing sprite is missing her legs, though.
GearToward responds:
I wanted it to be a long story but I know if i tried to make it a longer story, i wouldnt be able to submit it in time. But i can understand! Also with Yoshika, I was planning to fade the bottom of her sprite but just forgot.