the simple graphics could have worked for a horror game, but there's nothing to grasp onto whatsoever. the game is way too short, and while a story shrouded in mystery can work well, the parts of the story you reveal have to be good. this wasn't scary, plain and simple. I'd recommend revamping this as a longer, more drawn out tale, and add some creepy music or something to set the mood. if that's not your style, just work on the story itself.