dude you suck
I watched your 'gun' movies and they sucked and were the same thing in every movie... this was no better, stop making flash animations if you suck at it, which you do.
Crappy work and no fun
Sorry, but grafic, sound, idea and realisation was more then poor.
A littel more effort, a littel more technical preciese (like stop moving the mouth for 30 secs with absolute NO sound) would made this eventually better.
But the idea was also... boring.
Better luck next time!
Don't feel bad...
My voice never goes good with Narrorating and advertising either. Mine only goes good with comedy...and I'm working on a serius flash movie right now...damn, I might need a more serius voice actor to give me a hand.
It was a nice try at advertising
Your voice sounded a little distorted, almost like your lips were too close to your mic. Also try to find other voices to act as your character, if you cannot find any, then try manipulating your own through the some audio software (ie; Cool Edit).
WTF is this??
this is crap