This is peak newgrounds.

It burns!

It kills me from the inside to see something like this This should just be forgot about by everyone who saw it!

K

^^Good Points^^
This was mildly entertaining. I liked how funny your characters were and how the "Fag" kept getting his head knocked off. You had lots of background music and sound effects too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, the graphics were really terrible. Your animations were not realistic one bit, and they really were slopily done. You could really fine tuen your animations and put more detail in both the animations and drawings to make this much better. The voice overs also were very low quality. Try sitting further from your mic when your record something.

Don't watch this... trust me.

Don't even bother clicking on the link; the second that you spend doing that is a waste. My recommendation is that Newgrounds stops posting submissions for just whoever makes a flash. I come here to be entertained, not for amateur hour.

Anyways, Ryan I suggest that you wait to get more experience before you post something else on Newgrounds. Keep trying and I'm sure you'll eventually get it right.

Hmmmmm.... let's see, how that got past both the
blamming process and the turd of the week award will forever be a mystery to me. You need to work on your animating something serious. But seeing an animation you've posted 3 years later, it doesn't look like you have. So, keep working on your animating, maybe you might produce something worth watching.