Okay, then.....

If you are looking for humor, watch this. If you are looking for a poem, and are not homosexual, FORGET IT!!!!!

Not bad.

The time delay between the frames in the movie is too short... Increase the time that the words of the poem stay on screen before they fade away...

The Poem itself is real nice, I like it.
but try to have longer time delay in future poems... for I do hope you will do some more..

Not everyone's a born poet

It's pretty nicely done. Although I have to say about the poem all your rhyming sounds kind of forced...a good poem doesn't need to rhyme, you know =)

((( COOL )))

Well that was nice, i do like the effects used, like the curser at the begenning, and nice little flash here, nice work...

~X~

whell

as far as the poem itself gose, not very well done, ther wher unnesasary pauses and a few tence shifts. but the message behind it was clear and you have to be fairly secure in you masculinaty to post something like this (so i give you props for that), but next time do some editing before you post a poem, you might get your message acros beter.