not good

well, the sketches were alright.... but this one wasn't very good. a lot more needed to be done to this one.

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I thought that was the loading screen....... omg that was.... just... the worst... well not as bad as the one entitled "4" but it comes close. geeze dude...

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this needs to be way longer.
it also needs to have a sound file.
and i don't get what is happening in this..
a ball comes down.. and jumps at the man.. he blocks it.. it jumps again and hits his face.. and he gets a big red circle on his face..

I really don't get it. is it supposed to be free blam points?
if it is, thank you.

-Money

((( HMMMMMMMM )))

Ok well not sure if its your first or not, but a few things to improve on would be, backrounds, color, storyline, dialog, etc you get the point, but hey its a start, and might wanna add a play button...

MOVIE COMMENTARY: A short drawing style film with a red ball...

~X~

sorry but i didnt like it

this mad no sense man and it wasnt funny . i think with a little bit more work it might be worth something but i dobt it. I have to say this though it was the worse piece of fuckin shit i have ever seen in my life sorry .