If Rocket J Squirrel and Bullwinkle J Moose was real, You'll be sued by them!
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I submitted this a while ago, it got blammed, so I changed it a little. Have a look at my site, if you feel the need.
How could you you son of a bitch!
Fuck you!!!!!!!!!!!
Make other story...
Hmm... It's bad story about very good heroes... Why not to try make another story with them? :) I really hope, tht's i will see more flashes with that fine heroes...
My vote 5 of 10, because i like them... Your story's mark- 2 of 10....
HOW DARE YOU!!!
HOW COULD YOU DO SUCH A THING TO ROCKY AND BULLWINKLE!!! THIS PIECE OF CRAP DESERVES TO BE BLAMMED IN EVERY WAY!!!
Hmm...
Try adding a bit more story. Shooting people in the face has been done since the beginning of man kind. As the main punchline of a cartoon it's a bit old.