I'm sorry, but learn how to draw first.

Look, I don't like blamming people, but you need to put more thought into your movie before posting. The music is inappropriate and confuses the viewer. The drawings can barely be considered physical representations of people. Surroundings look as if they have been thrown together in ten minutes. The animation is choppy, and unrealistic.
Too short to get into. NO real cliffhanger and no character developement. Before you can end an episode, you have to distinguish your characters a little bit so that the viewer can identify with them. Over all, I think that you need to learn the basics of a story telling, drawing, music directing, and flash basics.

OK

its not too bad mate u just need alot more hard work and effort put into it and it could be so much better

((( NEEDS MORE )))

And by that i mean maybe add some voice sounds, great animation and decent art, also noticed that the music sounded alot like espn sports center intro music ohwell...

~X~

Great... For a first movie...

You should really practice your drewing skills... And sound is desperatly needed... But if you can make it not only longer... But longer than longer (hope you get what I'm saying), that would be great!... Hope you do even better next time...

Pretty good...(SPOILER)

Nice drawing on Kugo and the background trees but the fire was a little weak. Needs more plot development (i.e. more of a reason for vengance than some random dying woman telling him to) The way he runs was a little lame too. Overall pretty good