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Meh

it was shortly animated which sucks. i dont understand your point for this flash are you trying to say that smoking is bad or just trying to make people laugh? well whatever it was it failed it wasnt funny it was actulally stupid the animation was above avarage but nothing spectacular. there was not much movement in him just coughing. His eyes didnt move another thing taht sucks the sounds werehowever good they fit in well to the flash and were not out of order. the ending was predictible as some people below me have said. his face burining was actually pretty funny to some extent. at the end when it says to play again the cigarette is still burining which is good because it shows you added time to this. i dont know what elese to say exept the background was blue which is avarage i would have given you an 8 if you made this longer made his eyes move chnaged the background into something like a house even if you took a photo from google images it would be better then blue because I dont know where this is set out. anyway 7/10 and 4/5 its a good start you should make a longer version maybe people come up to him and piss on him lulz or something actually you probably dont even care i will be suprised if anybody reads this reveiew because nobody would give a shot about someones oppinion lulz well as i said befour 7/10 and 4/5

Made me laugh

It made me laugh throughout, and the ending was great, though predictable.
The animation was a bit too basic, but it somewhat suited the movie.
The sounds were nice, audible certainly.
It maybe could have been a little longer though, or there could have simply been a better background to it, but it was an enjoyable short film.

Funny short film

It made me laugh, and the ending was great if a tad predictable. Animation was basic but suited the movie in my opinion, and the sounds were nice. Maybe could have been a little longer, or there could have been a better background, but it was an enjoyable short film.

((( HEH )))

Ok well notbad, it was a tad funny, maybe you should have made his eyes move abit, nice work though, maybe abit longer next time thuogh...

~X~

hmmm?

well i can say it ant the worse peice of crap i have seen not bad

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Score
2.80 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 30, 2003
2:36 PM EST