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Made by Stuffed Wombat


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no pude iniciar el juego

Decent text adventure! Graphics and general aesthetic were very interesting with this weird grungy collage feel to it, though I felt sometimes it worked against itself since it made it very difficult to parse (and the way the font would get chromatic aberrated at times made it physically painful to read). Also while the game has some cool reactivity and variability between playthroughs (reading the letters in a different order for example) it also had some weird consequences if you did things out of order like opening the window/cleaning and such for the apartment. Not to rain on it, but it did ultimately feel a bit lacking to me: not necessarily bad or anything as it was still a positive experience, but it didn't really have anything special that stood out to me that hooked me into playing more. The most special aspect it has at its moment is it graphics, but as interesting as those are, they actually made me a bit conflicted as stated before with its damaging its readability. Without that, its 2nd best attribute is its humor, and while it is not too shabby with its funny dialogue and amusing events, I dunno if it's enough to make it stand out from other visual novels. I understand I might be being a bit unfair and holding it up to a higher standard than necessary based on previous entries from you which I felt were a bit more interesting. Again, though, it was still a positive experience and I am still interested enough to see where this goes a bit more: just not sure how much longer.

By the way, I do wish it also had some quality of life changes, such as hitting a button during a text scrawl to speed it up, and the ability to resize the window to be larger because playing this game now is like playing a game for ants: so tiny, haha!

StuffedWombat responds:

those are valid points!
thanks for taking the time to make them.

the chromatic abberation will be turn off-able in the final release and u can press F for fullscreen :)

(also what do you mean by weird consequences for opening window etc? would be dope if u could DM me the specific thing u found weird, bc i dont really know what exactly u mean rn^^)

nice reminds me of be a 90 fast food worcker

This game its great! I really like the art style with the photos and the pixels, the story Its really interesting and I cant wait for the full game to be released.

This is a amazing game I love the Pixel art and it was really a blast to play through it has such an interesting story that keeps me hungry for more but as much as I want to play the full game I'm not sure I would spend 10$ on it just for a 3 hour campaign but other than that note this demo is great amazing job mate :)