not bad.
THE SYSTEM NEVER FAILS!
It's my first animation, hope you enjoy
ANDDDDDDDDDDDD, i did it on a app called "Pencil2D" i don't liked it, so future animations will be done in flash CS6
this is actually pretty nice!!
Scareev responds:
Thank you so much!
For it being your first animation, you did a pretty good job.
Though it does have its share of problems; there are this two black boxes on the top and bottom for no reason; You stopped animating in certain scenes, an example is when purple and orange (axe man) guys have a standoff in second 32, the bigger giveaway would be the suit-man (CEO, man in black looking) when he points his handgun toward the viewer (aiming the Skelly) this throws away the actions, as it appears less of a serious scene and more of a excuse to elongate the video, a way to get away with this is to put expressions on the characters (from °_° to >_<) or do the classic zoom on their faces; There is also those patches of unfinished coloring; In the fighting scene (purple vs orange) the gun just gets holstered, why? WHO knows maybe he prefers CQC.
There is also positives; Movement, your guys move and also show the path of movement, let me give you an example: 1° a hand________ it closed (the blank space is were the fingers should have moved) 2° a hand, it's fingers begins to close, it closed (we see the fingers moving not teleporting). There is consistency with the characters clothes, colors and accessories.
Took me a while to right hope it helps bye
Scareev responds:
Hello! thank you for the feedback! i read it and wow, this feedback has been really helpful for me bro, i'm really glad for people saying the positive points and negative points about the animation, i really appreciate your feedback a lot! thanks for it!
nice animation dude so is this like a series
Scareev responds:
Oh thank you! i did the animation without thinking about it having a story or series, but i think i will make another episode that can have a secret lore, with better quality, anyways, thank you for the feedback!
The pacing in your animation is a bit awkward and could use some work to make the characters’ movements look better. I’m also not sure what the story’s supposed to be here, and it ends abruptly, but overall not too bad!
Scareev responds:
Yo, thanks for the feedback! I'm learning how to make better movements and this stuff in relation to animation, and it still doesn't have a fixed story, I just did it for fun, and again, i'm really thankful for the review, it shows what i did wrong and right