Nice!
I like your sound, very good quality. The message was quite meaningful, and you may have even recreated the whole there behind the Matrix. Also, good job on the text for your first movie, basic but snazzy! I do have to say that I foundmyself straining to see some of the longer phrases, and also the wait for the next line of text was a bit, both very minor, but I thought I would menton it. Anyway, keep up the good work, hope to see more flash work from you!