Did this for a school project and this is my first ever flash animation. I'm quite satisfied overall but I know that some of the scenes need more tweakings and storyboard improvements. I was rushing for the deadline so I had no time to adjust some of it. Got some of the sounds of free aound archives over the net. I didn't remember from where but will find out.
Needs a lot of work
The graphics on this piece really aren't that bad, the characters look dececent at least, but the story had no depth whatsoever, you re-used the same sound effects over and over, and the text was poorly written. You don't need to find cleaver ways of introducing text, like having it zoom toward the screen, you need to either put all the text at the beginning or use audio.
What is this?
It was very boring.the sound was horrible.I think you waste your time making this movie.It was stupid.
I liked it
And i am in a unhappy mood very good graphics better then what ive seen lately
Your First? o_o
Wow. This was only your FIRST flash? Amazing. Shame it had to be a school project, heheh. I can't wait to see more from you. ^_^ ~Syn
Yup
I really hope this is a first part of a continuing story. It has promise as long as you don't make it into some Survivor rip-off. Nice start, I really want to know what happens next.