Love the overall message you implemented while still keeping the humor within it :)
Author Comments
This was the first-ever game I created from the story to the character, and I actually had a lot of fun and as the description states, I want to progress with Dah Mugetsu's story. He is just trying to bear all life has at stake for him.....see what I did there
artofsenpai responds:
i appreciate the kind words please stay tuned for the next version!!!!
Spoilers.
So first I have never heard of this universe and/or character, so if there is some sort of multi level background story I'm sorry for not addressing it. Since I don't know the lore, I have some questions, is Dah magical? because in the beginning when you chose between "Cry__Laugh" there are consequences like "Second Ice age" If so, what are the rules of magic? this is crucial for the world since you can literally bring the Ice age, and determining the capabilities of Dah. Other question, are Dah's parents really unaware of his magic? ("they did not have the energy to believe what happened with their son") How is something so important, so powerful (if you can bring the Ice age and also be a pyromaniac) not know by the parents, even if tired they can be notified by the doctors? is as If some parents forgot that their son is allergic to milk and they give it their son, because they didn't bother to check?.(Bad parenting if you ask me)
Mechanics.
Only three choices matter and they are the final ones, so why give us the illusion of consequences with the the previous choices when in reality they aren't of importance.
If this seems negative, I'm sorry I did not intent to do this with malice, and if I'm wrong in something please show it.
Edit: Pity you couldn't put the universe as you wanted; Happy to help bring that passion for this world, I'm curious how things will turn up.
artofsenpai responds:
no joke i was rushed to finish this game for a final project for my animation college course and I had a wrist injury to boot last week, so a lot of the actual story I could not place in the game. With hella grammatical errors and just trying to hit all of the notches on the rubric, what you got was the result.
But overall I am truly grateful for this review, and as you said this is a universe of my creation with different races the main being bipedal talking animals, humans, and spirits.
i appreciate your review and I hope you stay tuned for the further development of this game!
You have ignited my passion for this world I have imagined up from my childhood trauma.