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I can tell you're new in general, so I'll give you some advice. Obviously you need to put in alot more animation to your submissions. This felt more like a slideshow than anything else. Also you definitely need other voice actors to help you out. Luckily Newgrounds is full of them, so all you got to do is ask. I recognize potential when I see it, so just keep on practicing and you'll be making great toons in the future. Good luck!

LeoShortNose responds:

Hey! Ummmm, I've been Making Animations since 2019 (Not on Newgrounds), and I Find Animating at 24 FPS Difficult, I also understand that I Need more Voice Actors rather then Just Myself, However I Right ALL of my Scripts in the Notes App

Also Thanks for the Encouragement, I Don't get a Lot of That stuff, especially since on Literally Every Video of Mine (YouTube) I get a Dislike from my Brother

Thanks for Your Feedback!

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