This is shaping up really good. Everything is coming together.
Episode 6 - Space Invader | A looming threat forces Alex to lay everything out in the open.
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Hey! It's been a while! I was having some second-thoughts about this episode's script and it took me a while to be happy with it but here it is!
I just ordered a new computer so that will help A LOT with editing!! I'm currently editing off a tiny Windows Surface and an SD card for storage lol. Less lag... less crashing... more productivity :D
Hope you guys enjoy. I know it's a lot of build up right now but it's going to start paying off!
Thanks for watching!! And thank you so so much for the support! It really does keep me going.
-Lauren
This is shaping up really good. Everything is coming together.
I loved this episode and this project in general. Glad youre still pushing through because ik the headaches it comes with animating. The story is getting even juicier with each episode released. The script for this episode I felt seemed a bit rushed. For me it's difficult to cram a story/plots/subplots in 5min-10min videos but you do it very well.
Nothing majorly skipped over and using non-vocal scenes to drive the story was great and I had to rewatch a few times to catch hidden symbolisms (if there were any I hope im not seeing things that arent even there), but I do think the pacing between non-vocal scenes can be stretched out a little bit more. Voice acting was a 10/10 for me but the part near the end when Apollo was talking and then he sorta stops abruptly and then said 'obviously...' and then did it again and said 'right, ok as i was saying' those pauses for me felt weird.
Overall, great episode! and looking forward to the next one! I hope Alex finds a new career path because idk about this one. seems like this boat is just filled with scandals lol
So glad you're working on this still lol i missed it. You've been doing your homework on this one and the story is getting a lot more interesting and exciting. Im liking the new intro too and the music choice feels a lot more appropriate on in here. Keep going and good work.