((( HMMMMMMM )))

Well not bad, i see this is the part or just a demo type, ok well i guess its not bad, i have seen the other so the other is more importent, not bad...

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It's ok, but....

one of the main problems I had when watching this was that I had to keep pressing play, it stopped after each little scene. Secondly the sounds need some help I think, you can find some sounds that would have suited that better in the sound library, also some background music would go great.

I think really that your graphics aren't too bad, the way the bodies are formed, i havent seen that on here so i say thats a good style to keep.

One thing i would advise though is that you dont submit it each time you've added more to it, people won't like this and so will blam your movies which would be a shame cos they are really great movies for a beginnes (which i assume you are as you have no other animations on here, if not then please don't be offended by that :) ).

If you like i can give you a preloader and help you out with the sounds etc, email me and i'll get back to ya, my email is mufmovies@yahoo.co.uk

Keep workin at it

The movie's severely broken.

That, and in the begining, the writing goes by extremely fast. I read a page in less than a minute...it's really...really...fast. More specifically in the broken aspect, the movie keeps stopping (I had to keep right clicking and making it play manually, and I'm sure you didn't want that). So you should fix it..and resubmit it.

Frustrating

First of all, for every scene I had to press 'Play'. That was annoying. Besides that, it was nothing special. Put more in, I guess.

sucks sucks sucks sucks

what the hell... i had to keep going to play and it blew... stop wasting your time making this garbage