This is honestly bland at best, just like how most gmod submissions are. It's unfortunate because I've seen plenty of good gmod stuff in the past, and they actually got some great animation going on. This just felt like a slideshow of pictures and nothing more. I probably wouldn't be so harsh if literally anything happened in this submission. But nope, nothing happened at all. I get you want to make these shorter, but they need to have some sort of plot thread to them. Just have something to engage the audience with. Don't think I'm hating on you, it's just some constructive criticism. If I didn't tell you this, somebody will. All I can say now is improve and good luck!