Found a few things off with this short.

First off, the voice acting. It sounded pretty dull and dragged out. (e.g. The girl's voice wasn't able to adapt to the characters feelings and it was hard to tell if their emotions were genuine or not) Secondly, the animation. It was a bit off-putting and choppy. Third of all, the cultural references. Now, this may seem extremely controversial based on the portrayal of the people from Nigeria and India. Personally, I wasn't really offended by it, but just a side note for the future.

In conclusion, the plot was okay, but the other aspects need a bit more work.