When it comes to text, the rule of thumb is "you should be able to read it twice" if you want us to read it once. We should not need to constantly pause to read. Next text should contrast with the back ground color so we can see. EX dark red text on brown = hard to see, dark red text on light blue is easy to see. Ex compare the dark red at 5:17 to the light red at 5:26 this see how much different the text look as the lighter red really pops by contrasting with the dark black background & is easier to see. Finally the text hops all over the screen, so keep in mind that some of us may have small screens that clip the text from top/bottom or will need to scroll to find it. Ex small fuzzy white text at 1:39 on bottom of screen, instead could have been center of the black road & enlarged to have one word on top of the other, so that its fuzzy & large enough to be readable. Animation has a decent fight sequence.