You have an interesting thing going on here, but the whole submission felt a bit lackluster. Now the art itself was the best part about this video, you definitely has some drawing skills. However, the animation was really hit and miss. The walk cycles in this were pretty great, but there should definitely be mouth movements. You don't really have to lip sync, but just have the mouths move up and down like an anime or something. Another thing is that there should be more audio in this than just the voice acting. Either have some music playing in the background, or maybe outdoor sounds. Anything just to fill the void. Speaking of voice acting, make sure all the lines are amplified. Some of your voice actors were really quiet compared to others. If you don't have Audacity, I strongly recommend it. It's free and it'll help improve your lines a lot. You have potential with this, it just needs to be improved on. Good luck!