Love this concept, two half-baked evil minions going through typical office issues (we've all had a co-worker who only counted off the days to the weekend at some point, thanks for the motivation, Fred). Visually speaking, the setting is pretty spot on as well, but the end result is too static to be convincing. There's no (subtle) movement of the characters heads or other body language when they're speaking (or listening), and the voice acting veers toward monotone at points where it should be more passionate. If you can use these two tools to better support your story, you have a killer concept on your hands.