not sure what to say about this
pretty much the one thing i liked was having to avoid the "load file" thingies, that was actually a decent idea (although not executed well)
that's all i can really say for the whole thing: not executed well
some simple ways of improving it would be to mark where the end of each level is, add some music, maybe add some cool background effects
i think, although this game is objectively not that great, it definitely has potential, and i think that you definitely have potential as a programmer :)
- jack