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Madshort:1 Gruntshot

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It might not be good but it's enough, i will get better at this i have to. I'm not quite satisfied with this short if not at all.


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yo that's awesome

THIS IS SO FUCKING GOOD

Hey man, don't worry about it. This is cool! I love alternative madness styles and the animation was quite smooth, with the Lupin III-esque chase scene being a welcome bit of slapstick in a genre(?) that's usually serious action bloodbath or full comedy romp. Admittedly, the action is a bit hard to follow when it's as fast as at the start (probably due to the lack of colours/other distinguidhing features) and I found myself having to rewatch the part where the ATPs run away several times to get what was happening. I didn't realize the guy on the right picked up the guy in the middle. I guess the problem is that the viewer is jnvited to focus on the guy in the middle, because he's the one who performed the action of tapping the grunt's shoulder. If he was the one who dodged a shot, I think the rest would be easier to follow. This way, I didn't get that the other guy ducked and then the fact that the hand pulled him the opposite direction of where they go in the next shot didn't help.It seems binding those kinetic, attention-drawing moments to let the viewer flllow the action is the real challenge. I'm sure you're up to it and I really hope we see more from you!

Unit13 responds:

Thank you very much! Yea i realized i screwed up with the attention crap and mostly with awareness of what's happening on the screen .Maybe that's cuz i just was making stuff up without any plan as the time went on(it wasn't meant to be a short at first but rather a small lineart test for me). Soooo yea i 100% agree with you.

Lol

That is just Mwah. perfect

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651
Faves:
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Votes
91
Score
3.21 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 4, 2021
1:26 PM EST
Genre
Action