It's not awful, I'll give it that, you have a minimalistic style going on, which can work, but there were some issues with the audio, it was coming out of one ear, and that's really off putting for me. It's also not something that is really working for me, I don't get the joke, I guess it's some form of jingle, a more ambiant background beat might help a little.
Anyway, as I say, it's not bad, but there are a few issues to work on here!
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