FOR YOUR AGE IS CRAZYY‼️

A RED SPY IS IN THE BASE!?

It's good and all, but seems like something is missing. Color? No, I've read plenty of black and white ink comics. Background images instead of a gray/white screen couldn't hurt... Shading? Possibly... Her facial expressions change to match her fall into hypnosis... Hmm... Something about the plot seems off too... I want to enjoy this, but the storyboard doesn't fit, it leaves me with more questions than answers.

So out of five stars,
-1 for broken storyboard (there's a lot that's not adding up here)
-1 for slapdash art quality (lack of backgrounds and shading)

1 saved, the hero's voice acting was fantastic
1 saved, the queen's voice acting was pretty good
1 saved, general queen character design is nice enough

3 stars isn't a bad rating, keep it up. Moving forward, consider what you put into your works, challenge yourself to go the extra mile a few times, see how you feel about it, in comparison to previous works.

I'm going to click the follow button, to see how you progress in future works.

Nice.