Wow amazing
Wow I have to say the simplistic element of this is just pure amazing stuff really no need for changes as its a masterpiece, I think it might be because you didn't try to make it too fancy or anything, just portray it as how it's supposed to be and thats what makes any movie great so good job here, You have devoted good effort to this, Some other things could be discussed and so on for improvments so in my closing remarks you have something good here keep up the good work alright well it was a pleasure to review this one
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really no need for changes as its a masterpiece
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