With more knowledge and experience, you're animation skills have the potential to grow pretty quickly.

There's a lot to learn from this. For one, I'm impressed you had the conviction to draw mostly on 1s (1s means literally every frame) for most of the shots, but for what it's worth it's incredibly inefficient. Your basically doing triple the work for the price of nothing. Might as well be throwing wet wood in a fire, it'll burn eventually, but it'll make mostly just smoke and steam.

Definitely study animating on 1s, 2s and 3s. Also study straight-ahead vs pose-to-pose. Once you learn and practice your fundamentals I think you'll make something pretty awesome with it.

I can see the passion put in this. Keep that up and you'll do great.