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Winter Circle Demo

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This is just a demo. if you have any suggestions feel free to comment then :)

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You can improve the platformer by adding some effects. The game is not bad, but I decided to raise my score for you.

Good luck!

*Clubbin (International)

jcvgames responds:

Thanks for your comment. I will keep that on mind :).

You should really add Options so players would change the quality. It's just for me super laggy.

jcvgames responds:

Thanks for your comment. I will keep that on mind for next update :).

An extremely basic platform game will few redeeming features. Has an odd 'jump underneath platform' feature that kept me from dying once that I've never seen and probably is an unintended side affect. What happens if you touch underneath a platform and jump it moves you forward and falls upward to the platform, at least that is what seemed to happened. Not going to play again to see the exact effect.

Some things to consider:
1) Don't make the first jump in the game require a double jump - easy the player into the gameplay.
2) Jumping blindly, not knowing what is ahead of you is not fun. Maybe introduce and arrow that points toward the next platform if it is off screen.
3) Checkpoints if the level is long / extremely hard
4) Have an indicator of some kind identifying the exit

jcvgames responds:

Thanks for your comment.

Yeah, the underneath jump was something when development was not intended, but after testing I saw that it was a different feature from the usual platform games that's why I decided to let it.

Totally appreciate all your suggestions I will keep that in mind for the next update. :)

I liked it, although it could use some music and arrows to show me where to go. Other than that I like it a lot!

jcvgames responds:

Thanks for your comment. I will keep that on mind :).

Credits & Info

2.58 / 5.00

Jan 4, 2021
4:56 AM EST