Thanks for the criitique. With the narrator I honestly just wanted them to sound excited? The narrator and the main actors are still just starting out so the delivery is what it is. My direction could also be better. Also yeah, I did my best on the sound desiign, so I can understand if some parts might be a bit louder than others, I'm still getting better at it. On the topic of the acting; being though that they are at a university for goth people the lack of enthusiasm might be fitting, might not. At 1:28 I purposely overexxxagerated the music to show how much Rebecca hates the situaton, how much it kills her inside, and also because I think jump cuts to mundane things are funny. One of the things I tried to communicate through the short is that Rebecca wants to be alone because of a situation that happened prior to the day before thats still fresh in her memory, but yet she still has to put up with beiing shown around. Thats why at the end she is shown crying. Not sure if my communiication could be better. Thank you for enjoying the designs, I hate designing things, so that's a nice compliment.