Looks a little more like a turtle...
Eh...
I like the concept, but I think that this would do better as a clip in one of those big long animations with several of these short little animations put together.
If the snail had more of a circular shell with a spiral on it and two eye stalks instead of a head, I think it would be a lot better. Though, as I said before, I like the concept.
3/5 7/10