I think what makes videos like this, in the vein of Jack Stauber and PilotRedSun, so good is their content being wildly different from the style or enhanced by it. Jack has emotional shorts that can be read on a surface level or searched for a deeper meaning, whilst Pilot uses the low quality artwork to set a tone.
This just was just a dude saying he had haemorrhoids in an aesthetic style. You show promise with this format, you can do better than shitposts. Sorry for getting so wordy.